Love is like the unstable clouds.
You can never control its vows.
And we are the melodious birds.
In the sky sometimes we fly.
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i like it, your style's really nice.thanks keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***
its more than perfect! ! i dunno wat to say! ! i like your style i think you get me wen i read ur poems, as if you have this feeling inside like i do! ! keep on i like ur work! !
I love the last 2 lines. It seems to tie all together. Thank you for sharing :)
Poet dear, Your love is stable. But love to the lover. May be your beloved in search of you may be. Think positive and love is close to you dear. Never mind my suggestions, you emot.
Hi, The nature of love for you is like clouds...nice comparison! keep up! Thnks for inviting me to read your poem appreciate if you could pass some coments on my poem aswell.
I like your style of writing... this one is a good read.. keep them coming.. :)
This is a pretty cool poem. It puts lif in it's true prospective.10
Rhymes beautifully. Impression words and view on love