Friday, February 7, 2014

The Nation Comments

Rating: 3.5

The nation, built on the tears of those native.
Built by the slaves of other nations.
The great kings to make changes, shot down like false prophets.
Freedom, a word used to those who are blind from seeing.
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Gary Hembree
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Kanav Justa 08 March 2014

, , , great write gary, , , well done, ,

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Noreen Carden 08 February 2014

Wow Gary this is terrific.I love the first line.A very real poem.Well done to you a definite ten

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