to Ray Bradbury, looking back, or forward
the names of things we held in our heart
when alphabets foundered and worlds came apart
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Nicely written piece and your wording was great. I enjoyed this. Nice imagery, hey I love to write as well so please check my site 2 :) :)
Good rendition of words in an insightful piece, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mary and do remain enriched.
lovely written- t the green world when all its colours were singing and we were the Story and the story told 10+++
Looking back or forward we are forever reminiscing. Particularly when we get older. Remembering the simplicities of life that are now overlooked. Beautiful worlds to remind us of our youth. Thank you
Loved this piece on my first reading when I discovered your work, and delighted to find it again today as the poem of the day.
Poem of the day again on February 27, just like last year. Congratulations!
the tissue paper birthdays at a secret command all disappeared.... THANKS FOR SENDING.
Very touching indeed. And we were the Tree, and the leaves of gold - very expressive.
A poem worth being read again and again. Congrats for being picked POD.
A beautiful poem. Like to read again and again. Congrats.
Very Imaginative Poem with deep meanings.. Thank you for shariung Poet. Congratulations! 10++!
This poem knocks you over with it's reverence for life and all it's glories. I find myself enthusiastically telling my grandchildren about all the things I think are great in nature or heroes I hold dear. they sometimes look at me in bewilderment but I am sure some of it sinks in! Well written and look forward to reading some more of your poetry.
a wonderful poem with an enduring truthful story of what if any legacy do we the leaves of gold actually leave behind when we have gone? ..............beautifully written Mary
A beautiful clever write forma gentle mind A sound patchwork sewn together with precision and love Most enjoyable write poetry at its best
Wonderful imagery and imaginary. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Mary, such a brilliant write....Congrats for being selected...a huge 10+++++
I stopped by to peruse more of your work and am delighted to find such beautifully vivid imagery set free by the mastery of your wordcraft combined with a lyrical, melodic natural sense of rhythm and rhyme. A rare and enriching combination, indeed. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you.
and we were the Tree, and the leaves of gold. Beautiful poetic narration.