The Nameless Song Comments

It's a nice poem, I read its Urdu translation as well, the original poem is really beautiful.

It's a wonderful poem. The poet's 'oscillations amid optimism and gloom' are clear and tangible. I would put my two cents on: 'a bird’s warble at dawn', and ' a murmur of a streamlet that dances on the stones', and ' jubilant sounds on the shoulders of gales', to sing 'A tune in mirth', 'To join gleeful lays'

Beautiful poem...Jasmine..Loved reading it.. Beautiful description on each lines...

nameless song a lovely write to join gleeful lays or cheerless chants?

beautiful poem, really beautiful poem i love it so much

You hold the pen tight, You let the thoughts out And ever and ever good poems will be drafted... Remarkably fascinating and winning our appreciation you have begun your journey on the PH.

Hi Jasmine.I've read a few of your poems but enjoyed this one a lot. I like the way you fill each verse with so much stuff!

A beautiful poem Jasmine. Well crafted

Nameless song but beautiful one, beautiful...Eid Mubarak and let stars sing it_Soul

Between rapture and woe the spirits waver Oscillations amid optimism and gloom Some flowers wreathed for tombs Tiny blooms stringed for tresses Great lines summing up the whole tone and essence of the poem! Enjoyed much! !

I thank you sir Ramesh Rai. Blessings

yes it is timeless song of age wow! ! ! !

thank you so much for your words for my words. it is very tough to sketch pains n pleasures side by side which you have done with your great skill. wish you a happy EID. EID MUBARAK.

The images of melancholy are set side by side with the images of life, depicting a chaotic state of mind of the poet... of that poet who knows her job well... the interrogative mood of the poem is suggestive... yes, the lines are amazing, indeed!

wow...amazing lines..... very very good pal more later stay blessed