Monday, April 14, 2014

The Name Street Kid I Despise Comments

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l am an ordinary child
But they call me a street kid
The street is my home I never denied
And where I was dumped to see the evil world
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Susan Lacovara 14 April 2014

Quite a powerful poem! Often the world labels you with just a passing glance, seeing only what they choose to see. I hope that you stay safe, and survive what is hardest...ignorance. I especially liked your line, I ended up staying where they don't ask for rents....Today many of us are a doorstep away from that. I congratulate you on a poignant write. PEACE

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