The Naked Truth Comments

I take my hat off for you my brother, long time! I am speechless with this impressive masterpiece. Very simple and at the same time, very deep! This is a very catchy title. I also wrote a poem titled: A NAKED TRUTH, a different interpretation on the same subject. My brother, keep inspiring the World with your thought provoking writes! 10+++ Well deserved! Love and Peace for always!

An unusual love poem indeed...old souls having found the other. Why is a sunrise necessary...you have her eyes. Why is a sunset necessary...the darkness is made Light with your love. This poem speaks many things, and that is what a good poem does.xxxElys

a meaningful write... thank you.

A good write with well chosen words.

I’m not here to adjudicate You’re ineffable I’ve become the malapropism I want you Rachel Ann Butler

this piece is very pure and real. it was a pleasure to read. It has inspired me.it showed me that life can be great and wonderful. you very much sulaiman. you are a great help.

A lot of words didn't really make sense but 'I want you Like the river needs The ocean Like the moon needs The night We’re conjoined twins' Is brilliant :)

What; , , ? 'Fecundating, I grow you To be closer To me You seem very buxom' >>>>>>> You seem to mix words a bit; the rest of the poem made sense but these lines are confusing; ; ..! Pls explain... cheers Dave

Your poem shows the desires a person has for the word love. Some people are afraid of love, but those who dreams to find it can say this poem is their letter in a bottle from their journey of finding love. Godbless your passion and keep on writing for those who cant find the right words to say about their desires.

that is a sweet wonderful poem filled by passionated and sensual thoughts

This poem is so silky smooth, and the imagery is flawless.10/10

Good expression.

wow..Amazing poem with wondrful images..loved it

amazing posted 10+++++

i loved all. the tittle, the style. every point. u made it so truly. noble poem. worthy work. thanks

From: Miss Jo Gonzaga (Phx United States; Female; 14) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/19/2009 3: 27: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: naked truth oh its beautiful

expressive...amazing! !

Gr8 poem dude, such strong words!

hello, it is a nice poem, good image; i liked that part of it, though i didn't sense this honesty of the writter, that sweating that a poem may take from the poet to let the energy of the idea be exposed to the light, it has been a while i haven't write a single poem, not even an attempt, and i am urging every person who writes poetry to give it a thought, i know, it is hard to be a visionary or to apply the stream of consciousness on one's writing....Anyway, your poem is fine, it just can be finer if you gave it some drops of sweat, some pieces of your soul; good luck and thank you...

wow! nice 1! ! deep touchin......a plea to nature! ! so true! 10++++++