The Naked Child Comments

A poem that pulls us up short.'If you do it to one of my least brethern you do it to me'.We cannot say that we love our fellow man if do not start with loving and caring for all our children no matter what their creed or colour. We are all guilty.10.

A powerful truth..so well penned...

Another great poem from you. Well penned. Truthfull poem Thanks for sharing with me 10+

You've truly felt the real situation. Nice to read. Deserves 10+

a wise write! your pen engraves a ridiculous Reality! indeed we are living in a Complicated World; no justice, no peace, no equality. a touching poem. great! 10/10 thanks for sharing

Sad write, there is a lot of injustice in this world Lynda xx 10

Fair comment Sir. but parents can only do their best in small villages and big cities Caring parents that is

A heart touching truth about ourselves.......................

We are living in a deceptive world. On the one side UN charter speaks of no war but unity. On the other side, wars, poverty, starvation, malnutrition, hoarding essential things etc still exist and swallowing many lives day by day. Every today's child is a citizen of tomorrow-they all say, but in action, child labor is taking away their bright future and they die out of starvation and malnutrition. A well thougtful poem.

touchin...can feel the life in yur lines....a must read by all....1000++ sebastine

wow, sad, great and touching 10++

Bhaswat: You give a sad but true commentary on the condition of the world's children. A good write. Please read My Special Child. Thanks Lynn

Great poem! ! 10 votes! The poem's meaning is the greed of globalization and capitalizm I think...

Laughs at the face of civilization’s galore The truth of human progress is naught If it has this naked truth to ignore This has the whole woeful poem in it excellent meaning and theme I hope one day there maybe a better tomorrow for those innocent bystanders of the commercial monster.

I am touched! ...its excellent thanks a lot for sharing

A great write Nice flow

You have revealed a very nice theme...well described and implied....10+++

a very good comparitive analysis done w.r.t. first and third worlds.....and reasons allaocated...liked it voted 10.

Very touching lines expressing the diverging truths when we howl the development and achivements. We have to define once again Gobal development and achivement on the basis of distribution of resources and the fulfillment of justice. Your lines did pierce my heart regards

True, the seeds of tomorrow