The Mystery Remains Story Poem Comments

This is excellent in content but let down by a lack of attention to the music (meter) any poem needs to succeed, rhythm is enticing, message is substantial and a few tweaks would make this perfect. H

Ivor, an enjoyable read, I agree with the sentiments expressed. The dark ages where nobody could educate themselves, for fear of punishment by the church. Must have been a dreadful time to live. Well done Ivor. 10/10 Bob