Tuesday, August 14, 2012

The Mystery Of Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clear smooth rain
Falls gently upon the ground;
Nothing else moves
Not a sound.
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Smoky Hoss
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Heather Wilson 27 August 2012

Water we can`t do without it! , love your thoughts and poem.-lovely write.

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Joseph Anderson 20 August 2012

An then perhaps a rainbow. An ode to the beauty and need of those precious showers. And a joy to read. I admire your love of nature

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Constance K Yost 20 August 2012

As always, we are blessed and refreshed by another of your inspiring poems. Constance Yost

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Valerie Dohren 15 August 2012

Makes me feel refreshed and invigorated - lovely write Smoky.

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Leslie Philibert 15 August 2012

Like this, well crafted poem that transports its message.

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Eric Cockrell 14 August 2012

we come from water we have forgotten.... a great, beautiful, and inspiring poem!

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