The Mystery Of Rain Comments

Totally brilliant piece..... thanks for sharing....

Wonderful Rose Marie TFS

Words of blessing, storm and relationships, beautifully crafted!

Magnificent poem on rain.Exquisitely written.15 stars.

When I am lonesome And tears come streaming down my face I used the rain to wash them away Hiding my sorrow and temporary weakness And Iremember My beloved mother Her tender loving hands Wiping my tears......so touching with nice theme. Beautiful poem nicely delineated. Thanks for sharing again.10

Number TWO: I cite the last four lines here: And I will remember My beloved mother...Her tender loving hands Wiping my tears........You have a loveliest and tender soul, Mrs. Juan-Austin, a loyal daughter to your beloved Mum. Myriad of 10's for this sublimest poem. God's Blessings in Abundance be upon thee.....

Number ONE: I love the rain a very lot too, but the rain that falls like bullets, I dislike either.The whole poem is a brilliant metaphored poem and each stanza are as beautifully created as the rest, having read time and again, I must say that the four last lines from the final stanza did it for me, Please read Number TWO, thank you.

They call that rain disaster sometimes but they didnt know rain is a blessing from the sky.

nice stanza- It is in the rain That I witnessed Nature's equality It spares no one Rich and poor Good and evil. - this is GOD mercy for everyone equally

Wonderful poem penned so lightly. Thanks Rose Marie for all your beautifully thought out comments. Robert

Rose Marie, your poem expresses renewal. Rain has its essence to share over the whole Earth. It touches all and everything in so many ways. Flowing peacefully and destructively. A wonderfully thoughtful write.+++10 Robert

Rain, such a beautiful thing...All living things on earth depend on it...Great poem...10+++

Tenderness of raindrops amazes mind and this motivates life into higher realm. Hiding sorrow and weakness life proceeds ahead. This poem is brilliantly penned...10

Excellent poem, I loved every bit of it. It deserves more than a 10

I like the way you have rationalized the stream of your expression in a definite scheme splitting it into six distinct stanzas! I was stuck at each stanza to catch the flow of your thoughts….so meticulous so elegantly crafted! Loved the first four lines of the last stanza of your poem: When I am lonesome/And tears come streaming down my face/I used the rain to wash them away/Hiding my sorrow and temporary weakness…a very creditable piece of poetry!

I love to look up! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

When I am lonesome And tears come streaming down my face I used the rain to wash them away Hiding my sorrow and temporary weakness And I will remember My beloved mother Her tender loving hands Wiping my tears...........................touching lines of a lovely poem.