Friday, February 7, 2014

The Mystery Of Poetry, The Unexpected (For Bv) Comments

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When certain words and thoughts break Reason,
And they just live now on their own,
There's an Explosion and a lesion,
That cuts right thru an unknown zone,
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Sandra Feldman
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Mac Adrone Adonay 07 February 2014

this poem is written in octave. good structure, poetry is the painting of words in which the colors are found inside the heart of a creative thinker. nice poem. :) i invite you to read my poems. :)

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Valerie Dohren 07 February 2014

An inspired depiction of poetic thought. Very well written Sandra, and a departure from your love poems.

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Soulful Heart 07 February 2014

U indeed have made me richer by sharing these words.... the compelling words that paint our feelings create a newmasterpiece for atleast ourselves....

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