Friday, March 14, 2014

The Mystery Of Love Comments

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the beauty of the colour of ur eyes
with one amazing powerful sparkled glance
i am binded by ur magical charm
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

Seems marital sort of love which is the purest one, I think. The sincerity of the poetess is self evident here. A good poetic sense indeed. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 August 2017

am binded by ur magical charm your unexplained mystery your smile a deep trance, your touch, my desire..... my dream.. these are the points i collected from your poem after reading it and rereading it carefully.. a fine love poem full of desire and passion. thank you for your great expressions.. tony

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