The Music Of War Comments

Rise from the sound The spirit from the ground If war is what we look on peace is the sacrifice if love we search on Serene come to life Which melody we want to dance A cry or a smile our hearts know They are... Nice write Tim! _Soul

You do have this innate sense of structure which drives the narrative so well. The question I ask myself what drives all these dark fantasies you write. Intiguing but it does not detract from the quality of your writing and you do it in rhyme as well. Am so impressed with that because your rhyme never feels forced. Thanks.

This is splendid :) u capture the feelings wonderfully including a solemn orchestra that sounds their end, this kept me glued the whole way thru! Great work! Titi