Sunday, May 6, 2007

The Music Is Beginning To Slow Down Comments

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The music is beginning to slow down
and slower still the horses circle round
The man who sold the tickets
is counting his small change
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Sean Joyce
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Anna Russell 06 May 2007

I really enjoyed this Sean. Finely written and I could almost hear the fairground music as i read. Hugs Anna xxx

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Sandra Fowler 06 May 2007

What a fine poem. Poignant.lyrical and memorable. No matter if the music slows down, we will write on. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ana x 06 May 2007

that is weird and amazing :)

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Sean Joyce

Sean Joyce

Galway, Ireland
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