Wednesday, July 7, 2021

The Murky Lake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Defeaning honking
Of large entirely white swans
And water lilies
Bathed in lovely golden light
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2021

Beautiful imagery with beautiful feel! .. Can close my eyes and feel like I'm there! .. Love it! .. And ever so calming too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2021

Swans and water lilies are beautiful by nature...added sunshine is the most essential to make even the murky lake look beautiful....very amusing work...5*****

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Beautiful poem Rose! Loved it. Top stars

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Wow! Water lilies and Swans!

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Anjandev Roy 08 July 2021

Fantastic as usual.....thanks a lot.

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Wonderful version of swan lake.Just lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

wonderful version of Swan

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

2) The sun gives life and light, and this special Golden Light makes it all. At least my eyes see this beautiful scintillating scene.Brilliantly put! . I truly enjoyed these well captured words

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

1) The murky lake seems alive again with the graceful white swans and water lilies, the sun that makes everything alive, very cleverly put poem in the wonderful light of the sun.

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Quite a lovely version of Swan Lake.

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Quite an original version of swan lake. Lovely

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Quitenamn original version of Swan Lake. Lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Quiten an original version of Swan Lake. Imaginative, lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Swan lake at its best. Alive and well

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Swan lake at its best.

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A calm lake is quite dull without being populated by the beauty of swans and lillies

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Juhaina Tumlu 07 July 2021

Yes otherwise a dull lake. They are real jewel of pond.

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Lasaad Tayeb 07 July 2021

What a wonderful imagery and vivid life vibes from water waves and the murky lake,5*

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Belle Wassermeister 07 July 2021

Lovely poem, painting a very pretty picture. Five stars!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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