The Murky Lake Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Murky Lake

Rating: 5.0


Defeaning honking
Of large entirely white swans
And water lilies
Bathed in lovely golden light
Give life to the murky lake.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Swan lake at its best.

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Swan lake at its best. Alive and well

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Quiten an original version of Swan Lake. Imaginative, lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Quitenamn original version of Swan Lake. Lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Quite an original version of swan lake. Lovely

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2021

Beautiful imagery with beautiful feel! .. Can close my eyes and feel like I'm there! .. Love it! .. And ever so calming too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2021

Swans and water lilies are beautiful by nature...added sunshine is the most essential to make even the murky lake look beautiful....very amusing work...5*****

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Beautiful poem Rose! Loved it. Top stars

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Wow! Water lilies and Swans!

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Anjandev Roy 08 July 2021

Fantastic as usual.....thanks a lot.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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