The Move Comments

I can commiserate with you on this having recently gone through a similar thing, , , only some of the treasures I relinquised had been with me for over sixty years. It's amazing what one can collect in a life time and how freeing it can be to let go of it. May I humbly suggest you rethink the fourth line in the third stanza 'From my life they it seems they darted'... I think there are too many they's in there. Perhaps if it read 'have departed' it would fit better? ? ? ? Just a thought. Take care on your new journey, Shirley