A mouse looked through a tiny crack
to see the farmer and his spouse
who opened what she had brought back
from shopping back here to the house.
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H, it was truly a pleasure to read this poem. Recently, we have had our own experience with mice in the house. Those terrible traps should be banned. I am glad to say we opted for the humane traps, that were very successful and allowed us to free the mice far away from our abode but without harming them. Thank you for bringing this to my attention. It was most enjoyable. Love Gyp's
I thought at first that this was a Disney-like character, and I kept reading to see what would happen to the funny little mouse. What a trap you laid for me, MR. NEHRLICH, you sly dog of a storyteller! ! And how serious this one would up being. I thoroughly enyoyed it. Scarlett
You are, indeed, a great story teller; how descriptive your poetry is!
Wow! how philosophical. What an intriguing poem! ! ! You are such a good poet! !
My goodness what a long poem it is almost an epic but i must say it kept me interested this poem deserves to be posted in the forum you are a very good story teller mister nehrlich and a good poet TEDDY
Like Linda, Herbs, I thought this was going to be another of your rip-roaring animal comedies, and so I got a surprise from it as well. As for the message, though, I don't fully agree with it. Mice frighten me, and I love my leather! I'd never just harm a creature for no reason whatsoever, though. Warm regards, Gina.