Tuesday, September 11, 2012

The Mouse That Was King Comments

Rating: ★4.5

Drum rolls jesters dance, frolic and sing
The crowd waits with excitement for the crowning of the new king
Order order cries the speaker order in the house
From behind the curtain the king sprung out
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house laughter Disbelief
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Eindaray Kyaw 11 September 2012

So wonderful idea to consider a mouse as a king and also the rhymes you use in your poem is no need to deny....I like this

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