Thursday, May 15, 2008

The Mourners Comments

Rating: 2.9

Weeping for ones who in darkness lie,
the ones who in distress have sold their helpless souls;
for ones who have been born only to die...
perhaps for ones they never knew at all.
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2008

'They mourn for others and sometimes for themselves; they mourn perhaps for unwanted fears... condemning, regretting, yet waiting for the price after the tears'... lines most striking of this excellent poem...deep and meaningful, Jane...good work...10

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Estrella Baldemosa 17 August 2008

this is a great poem jane...you are a real poetess. keep it up!

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Colin J... 15 May 2008

'ones who have been born only to die...' All of us... Beautiful but sad... Great poem All the Best, Colin J...

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Stone Granite 15 May 2008

Jane - fabulous poem. I felt such a connection to it. ‘Weeping for one who in darkness lie’ is powerfully poignant.

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