Wednesday, May 31, 2023

The Mourn Of My Heart ❤️😢 Comments

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O heart! Why must you lay your love so bare?
To share your heart and soul with one so dear?

I thought that I was strong enough
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Christen Kuikoua
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M. Asim Nehal 20 June 2023

Good poem, nice flow.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 June 2023

Pains of the shattered heart is quite melancholic; wonderfully wrtten the morn of heart; nice to read

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 June 2023

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 June 2023

Must the poem's title not: The MOURN of Heart, Christen? The Morn of Heart is less suitable, methinks. I also see tears on your emoticon. The content is crystal clearly composed, cute phrases and a bit thought-provoking poem. TFS

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