Tuesday, June 30, 2020

The Mountain Peak Comments

Rating: 4.9

The great mountain peak
Covered with the whitest snow
Sun hits the mountain
The peak shines like a queen's crown
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2024

Beautiful and elegantly crafted is this rendition of yours. Thanks for sharing, Rose.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2022

Magnificent. Liked the prudent use of simile. Top score

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Anjandev Roy 09 May 2021

It enhances her power......significant...

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 December 2020

snow acts like a veil on the naked body of the mountain beautiful painting

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 July 2020

.I am so very sorry, Mrs. Juan Austin, I am bad in arithmatic, but to write 28000 m high instead of 2800 m, that's my worst arithmatic I encounter. Once again, my deepest apologization. I am not boasting, it's just a shameful mistake. Have an enjoyable day.

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Shaun Cronick 04 July 2020

Nature's beauty, beautifully thought up and delivered in a poem of timeless enchantment. 10++ and may you Rose Marie enjoy life and take solace from life and poetry and its many great virtues. Take care and thank you.

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Kostas Lagos 03 July 2020

Mountains, the crown of Nature....beautiful poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2020

The power of nature! ! Romantic hour with the peak of the mountain! ! ! Muse of the snow; To speak out your mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2020

2) Very imaginable this scintillating view from that Mountain Peak. You used the words " like a queen's crown" in your poem this reminds me a loveliest meeting in the supermegacity Mumbay, we sat at the Mumbai-bay and under our legs was the Queen's Neklace visible. That's why the impressive poem you created has brought so many most beautifult associations with it. A 10 Full Score for this scintillating poem and to MyPoemsList.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 July 2020

This is an amazing panorama the great poetess has described.. Once I stood on such a mountain peak, almost 28000 m high, I still can feel the coolness of the wind and how proud I became because of the enchanting mountain peak Since the peak shines like a queen's crown, my body and whole being got affected too, standing there on that mountain peak. It was in Serfaus, my place to go for skiing

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Anjandev Roy 02 July 2020

queen's crown........beautiful.....thank u. anjandev roy.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 July 2020

Yeah the sun gives it the light to make it dazzle. Its beauty enhances thousand times. Short and sweet poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 July 2020

Very nice. I love the mountains. I would invite you to read my poems, but I have a new account and my poems are not yet activated. I have five of them. Every time I post a new one I get this message: Your poems will be activated after they are approved by the system administrator.

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Kesav Easwaran 01 July 2020

Sun blessed peak. Nice imagery

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 July 2020

A wonderfully penned poem. Simply magnificent...10++❤️❤️❤️

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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