Sunday, December 6, 2015

The Mountain Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.0

As I stare at the sky
While the birds fly by
Wind blowing through the trees
A cool winter's breeze
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Billy Loving
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Adeline Foster 12 December 2015

Good poem. Read mine _ Moment of Life _ Adeline

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Wes Vogler 08 December 2015

Line 3 trees/tress Very nice thanks Billy a pleasure to find your site.

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Shakil Ahmed 06 December 2015

beautifjul poem with nice images, nice flow of rhythm which adds the beauty of the poem, thanks for sharing

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