Tuesday, July 10, 2012

The Mountain And Me Comments

Rating: 4.9

..so here i am amidst the mountains..
..just the mountains and me..
..for its grandeur like a potent wine..
..flows through every rock, every pebble..
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Rigzin Namgyal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 January 2018

A beautiful poem Rigzin. I can imagine how you must have felt while you watched the mountains in Ladakh. Mountains give strength of mind. At the same time it calms you with the wondrous beauty of nature.

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Kee Thampi 17 November 2012

a poem written on mother nature, when we fill words of emotion, it reaches to our hearts the mountains gaze at me like a king.. ..as if to narrate me an ancient epic.. ..the epic of the faded kings of this virgin land.. ..that stands buried between ancient days and now.. ..the clouds drift lazily between earth and heaven.. ..searching for perch at the top of d mountains.. ..the eagle pierces the sky in the distance..

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Neela Nath Das 10 October 2012

You made me feel the beauty of Ladakh.Thanks for sharing your experience thru this poem.

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Babatunde Aremu 10 October 2012

A wonderful poem. You have succeeded in taking the reader to the Himalays. Bravo!

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Valerie Dohren 22 September 2012

A really beautiful poem, great imagery and wonderfully descriptive. - would prefer you to have dropped the 'd and used 'the' instead, and 'that' rather than 'dat' etc, otherwise an excellent write.

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Guy Lip-more 22 September 2012

Powerful and beautiful writing, I felt as though I was there, very good writing.

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Neetha Sasidharan 19 September 2012

so powerful.....you hv got that inborn talent to narrate wat's in ur heart through smooth words.....not allowing the reader to get distracted, , , , so grt hats off..........10 pts, , , , kp penning...

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Ramesh Rai 17 September 2012

beautiful poem. i do appreciate. keep it up

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Dave Walker 17 September 2012

A beautiful poem, really like it.

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Indira Babbellapati 17 September 2012

ah, the eternal call of the mountains!

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Hazel Durham 16 September 2012

Catching the sheer majestic grandeur of the mountains and the beauty of nature in all its abundance overflowing with the magnificence of God's creation. I really enjoyed it, excellent! !

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Shivani Gupta 16 September 2012

love the flow of the poem..nature is beautifully captured in words..loved reading it..keep it up! ! ! ! ! !

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Jacques S Mateya 15 September 2012

-d epic of d faded kings of this virgin land.- like the personification here! good work and rich poem! bravo!

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Neela Nath Das 15 September 2012

I can just utter--beautiful. Nature is caught here with her beauty and grandeur.

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Eindaray Kyaw 15 September 2012

So great...an excellent poem..I enjoy this!

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Vipins Puthooran 14 September 2012

'tis really a beautiful poem! ! ! ! ! ! excellent! ! !

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Saadat Tahir 13 September 2012

i really loved the flow of the poem...the strong link with nature...the use of common charming visages...is endearing could we not convince you to dropp the extra dots cheers :)

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