..so here i am amidst the mountains..
..just the mountains and me..
..for its grandeur like a potent wine..
..flows through every rock, every pebble..
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a poem written on mother nature, when we fill words of emotion, it reaches to our hearts the mountains gaze at me like a king.. ..as if to narrate me an ancient epic.. ..the epic of the faded kings of this virgin land.. ..that stands buried between ancient days and now.. ..the clouds drift lazily between earth and heaven.. ..searching for perch at the top of d mountains.. ..the eagle pierces the sky in the distance..
You made me feel the beauty of Ladakh.Thanks for sharing your experience thru this poem.
A wonderful poem. You have succeeded in taking the reader to the Himalays. Bravo!
A really beautiful poem, great imagery and wonderfully descriptive. - would prefer you to have dropped the 'd and used 'the' instead, and 'that' rather than 'dat' etc, otherwise an excellent write.
Powerful and beautiful writing, I felt as though I was there, very good writing.
so powerful.....you hv got that inborn talent to narrate wat's in ur heart through smooth words.....not allowing the reader to get distracted, , , , so grt hats off..........10 pts, , , , kp penning...
Catching the sheer majestic grandeur of the mountains and the beauty of nature in all its abundance overflowing with the magnificence of God's creation. I really enjoyed it, excellent! !
love the flow of the poem..nature is beautifully captured in words..loved reading it..keep it up! ! ! ! ! !
-d epic of d faded kings of this virgin land.- like the personification here! good work and rich poem! bravo!
I can just utter--beautiful. Nature is caught here with her beauty and grandeur.
i really loved the flow of the poem...the strong link with nature...the use of common charming visages...is endearing could we not convince you to dropp the extra dots cheers :)
A beautiful poem Rigzin. I can imagine how you must have felt while you watched the mountains in Ladakh. Mountains give strength of mind. At the same time it calms you with the wondrous beauty of nature.