The Mother Nature Comments
In a cool winter evening
Sitting by the fireplace
Looking at the rainy shower
My heart dampened
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Beautiful theme. You combined your Mother and Mother Nature to celebrate dancing delight of our gift of life, water. Wonderful imagery throughout. 10 Krarin Anderson
Beautiful poetry. Mother Nature is a perennial source of bliss but engroosed in matter we are tormented and shattered. CP
Beautiful.One of your very best. I like what you have seen from your own personal window on the world. Warm regards, Sandra
surayya u have very sensitive heart as i can see in our poems very well write we need more from you dear
The poem presents uncommon combination of images, winter, lawn, white roses, rain, shining drops and winter evening....good job go ahead. Shanazar
Such a sweet poem....the combination of nature and mother's love is really a heart touching....regards
It's really a beautiful poem. The description of Nature's perfection is expressed in a very elegant fashion.....Regards
Beautiful poem....Nature is the main creating force as well.
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Wonderful write...good use of allegory in almost all lines...the image the 'diamond grains' create there is really nice...thanks Surayya...10