# The Mother Comments

beautifully written sir! it is touching!

A beautifully written dedication piece to the most precious love...that of a mother.....great piece Sam...thanks for the share

great tribute to the best person on earth.....mom! ! well penned

the perfect picturisation of a Mother... the 2nd n 4th stanza touched me a lot.10 up for this.

great and brilliant poem... no disgust shown as it continues to shine the world everyday... every single day to watch over her children giving light and life to every living things on earth... the very proof of God's wisdom...The Sun... what would life be without this pleasant smiley round? a wonderful poem of nature's gift...of God's gift.. The mystery of His wisdom... and as human, we have to take part in protecting it... to let it continue to carry on its way.. a very fruitful share, my friend... 10++++ l♥ vel♥ ots, maia

The son, the moon and the earth are your favorite metaphors. The Sun as the granny and mommy......A wonderful image. The life on earth is much dependent on sun. A universal poem. Regards Naseer

I'm glad you clarify who you are writing this about as the poem progresses... I was just about to feel horrible about myself as a mother because I ceratinly have days where I am 'tired and worn' and have ample 'disgust shown'. Nice metaphor, though!

a resonant creation! ! ! !

A very beautiful and fine poem for a mother. All mothers are same in nature. This is really a good poem, Samanyan.........10. Best Wishes Naseer

a fine tribute to moms

Well, this is a fine poem, one that's well written and expressed, and creates a loving portrait of what many of us think a mother should be, samanyan. Thanks for this excellent poem and fine read. Carl.

This is a conception of mother Universally accepted. How amny such mothers can be there ever smiling? ? ? The toil of day takes away the smile from her But its sure.. behind evry different face of a mother Strong loving pulpitations takes shape each bit of a second. Good read. Thank you.

Yes, every mother is great including your own children's mother...good poem with a good refrain

Mother takes joy in serving her children; nothing else can give her satisfaction..a very good poem my friend.

an expression so true to the image of every mother.

samanyan, Very warm poems, it is remarkable....10. All bedt. Tsira

As you say, the best among the Lord's creations is 'Mother.'

a loving tribute to mothers

beautiful the sun - mom lovely contrast

The sun depicted as a mother there...good concept...well brought out...10