The Moth Joke Song Comments

Hahahahahaha. Oh, you flitted here and there but you still nailed humor on the head. Great piece when your readers laugh out loud when they read it!

Chuck, I enjoy, ... but they had you in that place, and they should have kept you there! B.V.A.

What better way to be cheered up on a damp November eve...I bet your butterfly mind is a blast at Christmas...just avoid those headlights and windshields... Keep smiling. jack :)

What delightful absurdist nonsense - Milligan perhaps, or Monthy Python. Cleverly structured too with lots of lovely tidbits between the lines. A thoroughly enjoyable read. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Ogden who? Wonderful Chuck, wonderful! Hugs Anna xxx

Lol...I love this one Chuck...It goes in my faves. I like the part where you're looking at his suit...and also the part about his light being on. This is sooo good! ! I agree with Frank too...you must be an absolute hoot at parties! Hugs, Dee

Loads of laughs and grrreat visuals aplenty here! Love it all, but the second stanza in particular (bookworm: '...left her without a word', hyuck hyuck! ! !) . Wonderful wordplay throughout and a very cute n' funny ending. In short, just a whole buncha buggy fun! ! ! ! ! Est : ]

Chuck, do you tell these tales at parties? Cuz iff'in ya' do i'd like it fine iff'in I were placed on yir' invitin' list in th' future! Very astute work, here, Chuck... Wit & Cleverity & a large dose of good ole fashioned fun turns this verse to gold. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR