Monday, March 12, 2018

The Most Influential Look Comments

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The dominant deer glanced at the herd
A soft wind played in his mane and beard
Stood on a hill brave like a bear
His firm masculine body agile like a bird
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hassan hayati
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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2020

The man hated his act, and regretted the hunt He never touched the gun to respect the wild

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Hassan Hayati 17 January 2020

Thank you very much sir Jawad your kind attention is always a meaningful motivation for me. I learn from you.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 January 2019

great poem, sir! the given message is need of the hour and we must look over nature and its creatures that is duty of every man. a thoughful poem!

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Hassan Hayati 29 January 2019

Yes dear Jagdish, this is my wish, I hope that human will stop this hobby called Hunting, how can we be happy by killing a creature, unfortunately this is only made by human.

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Hassan Hayati 15 April 2018

thanks dear Akhtar for your attention and time to read my words.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

So the hunter became hunted, yes, beauty can silent the roaring guns.

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