Monday, May 5, 2014

The Most Concerned. Comments

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Impressed, and sit wondering
At concerns honest and serious
Of the bards blessed, in issues
Of today; Burning and appalling.
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Tajudeen Shah
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 May 2014

Hello poet Tajudeen. This was a powerful read filled with many words to describe the travesty and the neglect. I loved your ending. Loyd

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Neela Nath Das 12 May 2014

Human beings are the most idiotic creature of this world.We boast of our intelligence but we cut the branch of the tree sitting on that particular branch.Forgetting the reciprocal relationship between Man and Nature we rob the spirit of nature.It's our shame.Nature takes revenge anyhow.The day of Ultimate Judgement is ahead.

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Valsa George 09 May 2014

Nature sobs and bards lament.... Yes, we poets are the most concerned about Nature's well being! It is from Nature that we mostly derive our inspiration... But man is so callous in polluting Nature.... The air, water and the soil are equally polluted... Cities and towns have become garbage piles... When will man start thinking that generations are to suffer the ill effects of man's reckless misuse of Nature! A poem of great concern and beauty!

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Dinesan Madathil 06 May 2014

As I swim in these waters of poetic stream, our nature begins to look hopeful in spite of her initial semblances of a dejected dame.. A fine and enlightening poem Shahji... Thanks a lot for your comments on my latest poems..

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