Wednesday, April 8, 2015

The Most Beautiful Truth I Know. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fractures of a human mind,
Untidy, a mess of untied ribbons
Frayed and faded.
The picture once sweet
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Leah Ayliffe
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Tom Allport 27 April 2017

a fascinating poem of realising what really matters? that of the truth? ......wonderfully written.

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Kelly Kurt 08 April 2015

Well written, Leah. I truly enjoyed your poem

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Akhtar Jawad 08 April 2015

She takes a step back from the sun, The moon, into the shade where she has found The most beautiful truth she has ever known: Nothing really matters. Nothing. An amazing poem, really liked it...................10

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Leah Ayliffe

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