Monday, October 5, 2015

The Most Beautiful Smile I Ever Saw Comments

Rating: 5.0

The most beautiful smile I ever saw
appeared on a day
when all things bright and beautiful,
should have gone.
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Samantha McKinnon
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Jane Campion 07 July 2019

Abuse leaves a devastating stain on the past. This poem ends in hope.

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Chinedu Dike 22 October 2015

Home is supposed to be heaven on earth, a refuge from ugly experiences, a beacon of strength... However some people go through deplorable situations in their various homes, An insightful depiction of abuse at home, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Samantha. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Samantha Mckinnon 22 October 2015

Thank you so much and I will. :)

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Samantha Mckinnon 06 October 2015

Thank you all so much for the comments. This is my first poem and it has helped me deal with what I've gone through. Thank you all so so much.

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Fabrizio Frosini 11 October 2015

good.. then go on posting ;) cheers

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 October 2015

a very good write, Samantha! I agree with Kelly's comment and simply say: THANKS for sharing. And.. Keep on writing & posting Ciao

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Kelly Kurt 05 October 2015

The act of writing, I have found, is cathartic. You have dealt with this issue quite rationally and in a healthy manner. This was written very well, Samantha. I wish you peace

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Samantha Mckinnon 06 October 2015

Thank you so much. It means so much to hear the feedback. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2015

A smile is bright and beautiful and we feel and wonderfully expressed with attitude. A wise and amazing poem shared really...10

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Samantha Mckinnon 06 October 2015

Thank you so much, it means a lot.

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Mark Bell 05 October 2015

Well written verse on a topic That must haunt

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