Monday, September 28, 2009

The Most Beautiful Silence Comments

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the first silence was the day we met.
the complete, utter peace that filled my ears when my eyes fell upon your face.
you were standing there, looking down.
and everyone else disappeared.
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Milica Franchi De Luri 29 September 2009

beautiful, sad, well crafted poem..........Love the twist at the end.When i saw 'but' i thought o, they have broken up, but it is worst than that.............thanks for sharing

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