How I wish I would have the special words
To write the very most fantastic verse
I would pen it down with feathers of birds
write the nicest poem in the universe
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I love the sonnet form and this one is true in style, form and substance.We all would like to write the line immortal..Very well done
Beautiful, i see that you tried many form of poetry and thats a very nice idea to make you be one of the real poet..love this one very much
Superb desire expressed in an excellent poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
A non-comparable expression of heartfelt love, real romantic way. Excellent write.
indeed a blessed gift to give poems, perfect poems... NIcE! ! ! !
Oops! The last verses do not rhyme. But this one was for you and you alone The most beautiful poem, with a wonderful tone. (suggestion) . Keep on writing.
Many thanks, Herbert. You are right about the last verses. Good suggestion to use tone.