The paper thin-thread bare moment between
Sleep and consciousness is the most beautiful
Of the morning.
Just as the body breathes the new day
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before vice & need are answered - your response to greed, this most certainly is the most beautiful part of the day - the precious moments when you first awake. good capture, Matthew. Sus
Very well-written freeverse, you captured the few precious moments at the end of rest, before you must start the day and again carry everyday burdens.