Friday, May 26, 2006

The Most Beautiful Part Of The Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The paper thin-thread bare moment between
Sleep and consciousness is the most beautiful
Of the morning.
Just as the body breathes the new day
...
Read full text

Mathew Lewis
COMMENTS
Salir Airosa 11 September 2006

Very well-written freeverse, you captured the few precious moments at the end of rest, before you must start the day and again carry everyday burdens.

0 0 Reply
Goldy Locks 31 July 2006

before vice & need are answered - your response to greed, this most certainly is the most beautiful part of the day - the precious moments when you first awake. good capture, Matthew. Sus

0 0 Reply
Mathew Lewis

Mathew Lewis

Cape Town
Close
Error Success