Wednesday, February 26, 2014

The Mosquito Policy Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you take a Drop
from My Sea
to quench your thirst
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Lawanya Wijesekara
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Terry Craddock 19 June 2016

'If you take a Drop from My Sea to quench your thirst' exquisite, a sea of blood and not a drop to spare fore a mosquito, like sandflies tormenting black demons, well played when you slap them down :) a 10 my friend

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Thank you very much for the comment

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Brian Jani 28 June 2014

I like the approach to used in this poem.keep it up

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