Monday, December 16, 2013

The Mosquito Invasion Comments

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Smack! Whack! Ta!
Looking like idiots we go a clapping.
All arsenals released,
ears tuned to the familiar annoying whizzing,
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Elliot Moore Ahiator
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When the Devil found Adam too happy Snoring in Eden like a royal prince He let loose these insects singing And man has not slept well ever since............ Great humor in your poem.....keep your pen busy

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Brian Jani 28 June 2014

Well written poem, it has a touch of humor.keep it up

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