Tuesday, June 6, 2017

The Mortals End Comments

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His hour had come, for his mother smiled
And sighed beside her infant child,
But she too answered to the curse
And found herself an older nurse
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Joseph Bernal
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April V 04 October 2024

These are short poems taken directly from the pages of a book in a series called The Enchanted World, published by Time Life Books. The book edition is called "Ghosts", and you've only changed a couple of the words. Please stop misrepresenting yourself as the author of these plagiarized poems.

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Joseph. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Joseph Bernal 07 June 2017

Please let me know how I could write better poems. It is greatly appreciated

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