The Morning Triolet [a Triolet Poem] Comments

good one! keep up the good work

a very beautiful piece............. wow thts nice

The arrival of the dawn complement by birds' jovial song makes the morning beautiful. A lovely piece penned!

Nice work Prashant, yes, each day is a repetetion of a wonder, we never get tire of!

very musical..a good one for a triolet...very well done

Nice one, but I think you did not complete it. For me it is incomplete, although it epitomizes the morning glories and miracles of each passing day, you should complete that poem because it will be better of. thanks for sharing.

This is indeed a finely crafted poem, smooth in its flow, musical in its rhythm and meaningful in its content....good work prashant..I am giving it a 10...pls read my poem called AU REVOIR

Bursting with beauty.

seriously speaking i have read a triolet for the first time... and i m glad that i read a beautiful piece. ur triolet has a magnetic effect... u read it anytime and u can experience the freshness and charisma of the dawn.... well done......

A perfect ABaAabAB representation and the content has also a pristine touch. Well done.10

A lovely poem with fine imagination. Well penned too. Yes, a poem to treasure. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+

Nicely done Prashant, best, Jerry

fine images.. sweetly triolet

dear prashant....loved the pearls in the dew drenched grass., and the lovely rainbowdrawn.....a poem to treasure! little joys of life inspires the poet to write great poems.i see you love nature too.thanks for sharing the joy of morning with me! all the way....ten plus.

at first glance i thought the poem just repeat the lines but i was wrong! oh, that's good... anyway, nice write!

and rainbows on the sky are drawn the cuckoo sings some melody sweet... Each day when sun rises at dawn....................each day brings new hopes from despair//new vigour o face the challenge and above all to let the people know you are thereto stand for them.....loely poem to read.....10 read mine...colour..... anywhere...butterflies around

The sentiment here is as sweet' as a sparrows song.......

this is nice..so nice to read

very lively n a sweet representation..... :)

heavenly pearls roll down my lawn... Each day when sun rises at dawn and rainbows on the sky get drawn the cuckoo sings some melody sweet...................... dew when redeems at dawn nature smiles by rise of sun rainbow being drawn to blue blue birds seems to tweet of dulcet songs, as nature scintillates by golden rays when sparkling over the green, grin ramifies insisting upon gleams from heaven, eloquent write,10+++, thanks for sharing