Sunday, December 6, 2015

The Morning Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

'The morning sun soothe the light rain
as skies delights this glorious plains
in smooth display and precious glow
the day awakes in splendid show
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Shakil Ahmed 06 December 2015

in thoughtful heart you will remain the love I seek in joy and pain my hopes, my dreams to God above you will always be the one I love.' - - Beautiful poetic lines, nice flow of rhythm that adds the beauty of the poem, thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 December 2015

Giving proof to have true love and having dreams for God is definitely fantastic poem shared here with wise motive. Wisely penned poem shared.10

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