Wednesday, October 15, 2008

The Morning Bell Comments

Rating: 5.0

It shakes you from your dreams
dresses you in the fabric of this life
sometimes wears yesterdays thoughts
as if no one heard them
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Wojja Fink
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Sandra Fowler 08 July 2009

Very evocative. I love your reference to autumn leaves. Warm regards, Sandra

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C.H. Seow 29 November 2008

a beautifully crafted poem...i really loved your choice of words and the metaphors used in ur poem...may i know exactly how long u took to finish this poem and wats the main theme of it?

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Amanda 'blue' Leigh 26 October 2008

Ring them bells... Down the avenues... Wind swept leaves... I am left with an open mind... Thank YOU John, @`, ~~~~~ amanda

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