Tuesday, February 12, 2008

The Morning After Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting alone by a great sea visions of an
unknown world call out to me. Children
dancing and singing in a valley of green
among the flowers lying in the shadows
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David Blake
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Bonnie Collins 12 February 2008

What a nice feel this has to it, I especially like the stanza It is in their treasure of innocence and ignorance..... how true it is to watch children oblivious of what life has in store.... Very touching write..... Bonnie

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Thad Wilk 12 February 2008

A pleasure to read indeed David! Thank you for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best regards Thad

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