Wednesday, September 10, 2008

The Morning After Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was sheer agony when we said goodbye this morning
I could see your eyes while you held me
They were the eyes of a stranger, and yet they know my secrets
And they reflected my loneliness.
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June FeirCruz
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Marilyn Lott 19 September 2008

A broken heart is so very painful! It's indescribable when one is going through it. Sometimes with death and then no one can do anything about it, but when the person just walks away it's so hurtful. Great poem, June! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Mamta Agarwal 11 September 2008

saying goodbye is painful, well brought out in your poem. i wrote one on same lines One night stand.10

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James B. Earley 11 September 2008

Some wag once wrote......'every goodbye....ain't gone.' Who knows....what the future holds?

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