Wednesday, March 20, 2019

The Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tepid water from the bathroom tap
Washes my face with a flanneled slap
The water trickles between my fingers
My reflection in the mirror now lingers
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Paul Warren
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2019

Rapid sound of water with morning call you have perceived well and presented. An interesting poem is excellently penned.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 March 2019

With the growing age when one has finished almost all responsibilities and has ample time at his disposal, life becomes a bit monotonous. The routine sometimes gives space for a sort of melancholy too.However, positive approach towards life and living soon drives it away making us happy. Thanks for sharing an intimate thought provoking state.10 points.

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