Thursday, July 4, 2013

The Morning! Comments

Rating: 3.5

The competitive rhythmic snoaring of heavy sleepers
finally subsides and dawns the daily day, yawning.
The multicolored toothbrushes
after sweeping their respective oral cavities
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Rajeev Deshpande
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Connie Marcum Wong 15 November 2013

I absolutely loved the way you bring even the inanimate objects to life in this colorful and wonderful poem! Bravo!

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Ramesh Rai 18 July 2013

nice writing capacity but make it short

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Marsha Cleveland 04 July 2013

Yes the description is interesting and grabs the attention like a rabbit in a snare. Sorta like you can't put a good book down to wait to see the ending. Loved it!

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