The competitive rhythmic snoaring of heavy sleepers
finally subsides and dawns the daily day, yawning.
The multicolored toothbrushes
after sweeping their respective oral cavities
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Yes the description is interesting and grabs the attention like a rabbit in a snare. Sorta like you can't put a good book down to wait to see the ending. Loved it!
I absolutely loved the way you bring even the inanimate objects to life in this colorful and wonderful poem! Bravo!