The Morgue Of Once-Promising Poetry Poem by Seamus O' Brian

The Morgue Of Once-Promising Poetry

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Doffing my top hat and waving
dynamically with a touch
of doubtfully reluctant optimism,
I stand these words up on their edge
hoping their balance and form
might elicit, if not breathless applause,
at least some nodded approval.

I goad them and harry them
plead and implore, and in return
sometimes they leap magnificently
through hoops of fire, sometimes ascend
amidst the sulfuric smoke and fire
and pageantry of linguistic fireworks,
and sometimes they just tip over on their
little Times New Roman pedestals
and lay there flat and lifeless.

I sit here, blank eyed, wondering if
I should put my lips to this wan stanza
here and try to blow some life into it,
break out some minuscule code blue
font paddles and shock some attitude
into this listless line that began
with such promise in my mind
then withered on the page…

But perhaps instead I shall send it
straight to the morgue
of once-promising poetry.

Monday, December 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When the piece cannot deliver what the title promises.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 25 January 2017

seamus, this one made me smile. s/he who writes poetry should relate. i read once about my favorite haiku poet issa that he wrote thousands of poems, many of them bad. this has endeared him to me ever since. glen kappy

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Annette Aitken 21 December 2016

I never know which way the words will jump when I first start putting them down. Sometimes I will have an idea of what I want to write, but mostly I get a sentence that mostly comes in the dead of night,3 or 4 am lol then just let it lead me to where it wants to take me. A great write and very enjoyable read. Annette

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Bill Cantrell 19 December 2016

Very unique writing, I love it! You have penned how I feel many times, it is indeed a challenge and you measured up to the the task with this one my friend!

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Seamus O Brian 19 December 2016

Thanks, Bill, so glad you enjoyed it!

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Seamus O' Brian

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Galway, Ireland
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