Monday, August 26, 2024

The Moon's Allure - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

The bright moon dances
with the turbulent ocean.
The waves adore her
and they jump to reach the sky.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2024

The bright moon, the turbulent ocean, the jumping waves - all dance together in this beautiful poem. Top score and beyond

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Rebecca Navarre 28 September 2024

Deeply heart moving and deeply beautiful! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 28 September 2024

Makes me feel like I'm standing alone on the shore of a beach, watching the world passing in front of me! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 28 September 2024

Wow! .. So beautifully composed! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 28 September 2024

Truly amazing imagery! .. That captures the heart! ..

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Rob Lamberton 16 September 2024

A captivating mysterious Tanka, leaves me searching.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 August 2024

Very beautiful Rose-Marie thanks for sharin this bravo-worthy poem! ! ! !

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Beautiful natural scenes depicted most poetically. Loved it. A tale of unrequited love! Nice. Interesting Top score.

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Anjandev Roy 28 August 2024

Magnificent piece..... thanks for sharing.....

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Sandra Feldman 28 August 2024

Perfect, just perfect! All that will read will be permanently struck by the intense beauty and imagery of this poem and its immortal nature.A favorite for all! ,

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 August 2024

Simply beautiful! This poem is in my Favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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