# # The Moon Within Me Comments

Ah lovely philosophy.....Visishtadvaita? but i don agree with 'dirty, shallow with you', coz nobody has it...only some choose to have it sometimes.....

the milky white moon was milky white even when lying in that dirty shallow state There lies the highlight of this poem. Nicely written. Good to read.

Very meaningful and really beautiful poem :) nice one

Moon and stars will always shine. Truly poetic.

As long as there are poets like you, Sam, the Moon will keep shining and smiling for us. Great poem! : -)

Meeru Samanyan kadhandi Baga bethavazhlandi! A transfiguration occurs In the soul of the reader When he with you stands And looks up in awe and wonder Into the face of God! Thanks for inviting me to your world I know I am going to read a lot more too! No wonder, this too joins my favourites! regards Angel

What a deep piece...the visual imagery is staggeringly good....well penned Sam...I'm a fan

just a total surrender of all the wrecked of wave in our life.... it still stands and survives.... a poem that whistle the beginning of hope....wonderful my friend....God bless...a 10++++

very meaningful...brilliant thoughts shared flows with depth... expressed the unconditional love of God... ''the milky white moon was milky white even when lying in that dirty shallow state like i suppose the '' GOD '' in me....even even inspite of the dirty shallow within me'' i love these lines... 10+++++

Even the Lotus grow in murky water....great thought and metaphor

The moon shines serene throughout its shallow water experience. The moon is the feminine side of our emotions and allows your sensitivity and God to beam through. 10 Karin Anderson

very poetic! i like the moon very much! 10: -)

Beautiful.....very well comprehended, you have come out with a nice thought, the comparison...extraordinary!

Beautiful poem indeed. Great poetic expressions. Enjoyed reading it

This is a great poem. Reminds the sloka in Bhagavat Geeta: 'Nainam chindanthi sashtrani nainam dahathi paavakaha......' The essence of Geetha. Thanks for inviting me to read this great poem.

Your creative vision is 20/20. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

The equation is good but let me remind you of one thing. Let us not coin our gross nature as something 'dirty shallow'. 'Dirty' carries a negative sign. Our gross nature is only one level of mind and life. We can really lift the level. We can consider this 'dirty shallow' as a lower mark in the positive scale. Now that the negative sign is gone, we feel a positive thrust for better levels. Remember, every word has a negative pull and positive thrust and let us always try to use only those words which would give the readers the element of positive thrust. Thanks.

beautiful poem indeed...nice poetic expressions..liked it very much10++

a beautiful poem...... you have penned and expressed the vision in a clear way....

a poem of great depth and beauty