Monday, April 2, 2007

The Moon Weeps Comments

Rating: 4.3

The moon weeps
Without a warning
In the ebony night
When it becomes lonesome
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Mitchell Greenwood
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Scarlett Treat 03 April 2007

Unusual thought, that the moon would weep from loneliness. Why not think that the moon would shine brighter without all the competition....or not at all, because of the storm clouds...interesting...

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Con Nie 03 April 2007

I love the sentiment and the rhythm of this poem. Good job. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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And so it will shall be, as the moon still shines, despite all its astonomical intrusions...Fine Penning, my friens...Intruiging & creative pholosophy... FJR

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