The Moon, The Sun, The Sea, The Rain, And The Wind Comments

You have the talent of a true poet. I admire the last two lines, as they don't rhyme; they give a certain je ne sais quoi

This is very insightful Vincent..............a beautiful poem. Sincerely, Mary

Wonderful poem, I like how you started by describing all of our earthly blessings and then how man has destroyed what he should hold so dear