Thursday, May 16, 2013

The Moon, The Bride Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I shall tell you
As the flower tells the butterfly
On the night of honeymoon
The secrets of my life
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Abdul Wahab
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Sallam Yassin 18 May 2013

every love is making his way to tell the true and to take off what he borrowed to shine and to show his naked beauty to his loved one/ every great painted work of love thanks

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Yasmin Khan 17 May 2013

Self-revealing and self-analysing, the composition is highly symbolic. In neat metaphors you have told the whole story. It's right even the moon has some blemishes.

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Heather Wilkins 16 May 2013

these words are looking into your soul and revealing the true nature of the man. Very revealing, but none is perfect. A wonderful metaphor of life.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 May 2013

good imagery and metaphor beautify the poem well writ

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